Flying-pen's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Samura Moon]

Too bad, but I like it

I see your problem through your painting but I still like it. I sence a story behind and it fills me with exitement.
Yet I only see some problems with the sword and the feet, but nothing much else. But I'm not unsure that you are a great artist. Keep it on and cheer up. ^^

Mind look at my knew art? I just postet my first on NG. :)

[Cassher zero sins]

Strong!!

He show a very strong will and power. A scary power indeed, that's what I sense.
You sure have made good mucels, yet his hand look a little weird to me. But you make a good focus around his head, so as a wacther you don't notice the less good parts of you picture.
Very impressive work decerves a great grade! :D

[Syris]

How deep

Very beautiful, I say.
The colours are clean and nice. It feels so realistic you can almost feel the cold snow.
I msut say thougth, he look a bit too cold for a white mage. But whatever about that. Somehow, that way it makes contrast.

[CCS: Sakura]

Soft, nice and peacfully

She looks really good. Clothes simple and the shadows are good. Her hair looks perfectly soft and her face is round and nice. You need to practice a little more with the hands (yet you're FAR better than me).
The background is maching her good, and it looks peacfully, yet it looks like the flower leaves only falls from the buttom of the trees. Not that I know it does that in the realy world, but it looks a little weird.

suwako responds:

Thanks! And yes, hands are not my strong point OTL
and yes, the background does look rather odd, i may change that later lol.
Thanks again!

[--Miles "Tails" Prower--]

XO Great!

This is fantastic.
The body is nice and round, not stiff and dead. You get a good feeling of living. His cloths are simpel and realistic, and when I mean realistic, it's wear-able.
I see you can draw hands really good, (how i envy you -.-) and your sword look strong and not TOO big, (envy you more -_-).
His fur looks soft and the tails are furry, without being too furry.

I see you did not wish to make him look like the real Tails, well I didn't realized it was him in the first place. Also see, clearly, you've (maybe not on purpose) made him look cloud-like, yet it looks really good on him.
In the all end, Nice work! ;D