Oooh I wish....
I really like this piece, but I'm sadly disturbed by the bass (I guess?). I guess it is not so clear from the pc, but with headphones the sorround-sound is really weird. Like the after sound is waving from one ear to the other. You could say it was creative, but maybe you should've toned it down a little so it doesn't take more space than the main melody.
I don't know of how much help/sense my comment was/made, but just felt like mentioning it. Though I won't go hard on you, 'cause I'm not an expert myself when it comes to composing. :)
Aside from that, I enjoyed the 2 min of your creation.